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Fallen-What

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Move on over just a bit,
So I can take my place,
Atop this giant pile of shit,
And see your second face.

Here you sit with nothing felt,
And perched atop your lies,
Nothing real can harm or melt,
Your blackened heart, or cold, cold eyes.

I hate you, and all that you are,
And yet I join you still,
I don’t know how I fell so far,
Or in me what was killed…
I just had a need to write something and get it out and this is what I came up with. I dunno how great it is, but I've decided to leave it raw and as it came out. Comments are appreciated.
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lirpa-specials's avatar
O.o...great feeling...raw is sometimes good, in this case, i like it! straight forward and in ur face is how i got this too...nice