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So Good it Never Fucking Ends by ~we-were-never:iconwe-were-never:





I looked into a mirror
And all I saw was gray
I tried to make it clearer
But the picture fades away

And you could try to save me
But I’d only drag you down
So run away while you can
As I lay here face down

Well my feelings decay
So I’ve locked them all away
And I’m so sorry
But you’re too late

My caring is so pointless
It always seems to end
And if this life doesn’t break me
It will surely make me bend

My lips are just a muzzle
I’ve broke the key in pieces
I have never found the answer
And it rots my thoughts like cancer

Well my feelings decay
So I’ve locked them all away
And I’m so sorry
But you’re too late

You ask me what is life like
When your heart has turned to stone
So I ask you what is life like
Being made of flesh and bone

And you know I want to tell you
But we’ve been over this before
And I’d love for you to tell me
If I could love anymore

Well my feelings decay
So I’ve locked them all away
And I’m so sorry
But you’re too late

Well my feelings decay
So I’ve locked them all away
And I’m so sorry
But you’re too late
We’re too late
©2003-2009 ~we-were-never
:iconwe-were-never:

Author's Comments

Well... deviant art decided to screwe my ass over and delete this once, so I'm resubmitting it. I really don't wanna do the whole description thing all over again so I'll just let you grab your own meaning from my words. It's probably better that way anyways.

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:iconarivana:
i could start rolling tears

so sad, familiar, and eerily beautiful; the emotion is paved out flawlessly in my opinion.
i'm jealous of your ability, sad for the emotion, in love with the poem.
a favorite to reread, learn, and remember.
:iconfillerbunny:
this is wonderful... the rhyme seems a bit broken in a few places, but overall well thought out.

Nod
:iconwe-were-never:
I actually intentionally broke it up slighty in places, Just to give somewhat of a broken feeling to it.

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- Marred with atramentous scars - - Infringed and perforate -

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February 27, 2003

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